Monday, June 27, 2011

Rate my lyrics that I wrote please?

It's called Waste Not, Want Nothin'

Verse 1:
I have a terminal tumor
WE all have the terminal tumor
It rots away what we cannot find
Beauty can no longer be defined
All our viscerals now drenched in gasoline
Strike the match, they're just an eye gleam

Pre-Chorus:
My Surgeon
My Burden
Am I the first to confess?

Chorus:
I'm even uglier in the right light (x4)

Verse 2:
I have an incurable sickness
WE all have the incurable sickness
Replace all this skin with porcelain
Our true intents forever lie dormant
Natural Beauty's retaliation is getting close
Someone to fertilize this vast decaying rose

Pre-Chorus:
My Surgeon
My Burden
Am I the first to confess?

Chorus:
I'm even uglier in the right light (x4)

Bridge:
Do you like our pretty little land? (x8)

Outro:
I am typhlotic
WE are all typhlotic

thanks for reading
I'm 15 btw
and please make your own
interpretation of it please
P.S.
Typhlotic means blind
And one of Visceral's definitions is emotion
@ Chris
It's rock
@ Moo_fact
look it up
it means both internal organs and simple emotions

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